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it must really burn him up to have to answer to other 'weaker' creatures!

and then i was called away and i totally forgot what i was going to say =/...it was going to be good too.

well, i was going to compliment you on this chapter before i hit a great big humungus blank wall(i'm blaming years of drug use i my teens and menopause)... i am honestly sorry! please pretend this is a really good review and smile.

thank you,
ginny

i believe tiaj was channeling inuyasha

he was pretty calm... something about the scene tickled me, for the life of me i don't know what it was. maybe it was fluffy trying to hold back screaming female fury

>=D
ginny

wow very interesting story!
I like! ^_~
You gotta write some more! And if I was Taijina
I wouldn't take shessy's crap. He's so frigging old
and he can't even say something as simple as
"I'm sorry." *snort* and he calls inuyasha a immature pup.

and the plot thickens... DUN DUN DUN.

i guess tiaj and fluffy aren't going to allow the kikyo to get anywhere near yasha if they can help it... good, fluffy is being the protective older bro, 'bout time! (even if it is indirectly)

i sent you an e-mail with some suggestions.

ja!
ginny

watch your malapropisms and homophones... so easy to miss them, spell check doesn't pick them up because even though they're spelled correctly, they aren't the words you want.

your characters are well rounded, i like the extra dimension you have even given to sesshomaru, even the canon fluffy has more going on for himself than the typically depicted ice cube. goodness, he has practically adopted a rambunctious little girl that he voluntarily tolerates on a regular basis!!

you at least updated, and it didn't take that long either. hope everything is turning out okay for you.

thanks
ginny

if you need help editing, i can beta (i don't do lemons though)
general address on profile page, i will give you the other address if you contact me.
gin

sorry i haven't written this sooner but life certainly happens sometimes.

you have invented two strong characters and really pulled it off, they're interesting and provide humor and drama, BRAVO!

a pleasure,
ginny

ahh yes! that does indeed make it easier to read and it also makes it so much prettier! =P

points that this one has been pondering... does fluffy have to take in yash's pack when he makes yash pack? if yash is responsible for his pack one would assume that they would automatically be absorbed into fluffy's pack (they are stronger than the average humans and they are loyal and proven themselves to be good fighters).... does that include kagome, even 500 years in the future; as yash's intended? ~ sessha doesn't expect the answers right away and will humbly and patiently wait to read the rest of your captivating story. =D

thank you,
ginny

fluffy is really a cold hearted dog! hey, where's rin?

i like the way that yash and fluffy are having a dialog, i guess it's because he's pack now... i like this story, creating another strong character gives things another dimention, and she's NOT the "i went back in time and met sesshomaru and we fell in lurv!" BLEH!

suggestion: put an extra space between paragraphs so it's easier to read. a line or something else between scene changes ~~~~~~~~~~~~

i think it's great story and so are you for updating so quickly!

a pleasure,
ginny

I realy like your story! I can't wait for the next Chapter.

* dances a little 'Dark Witch of E.K.' dance *

it's still a cool story and you still don't have enough recognition, imo. much appreciation for the 'other side of the well' chapter, i didn't expect that!

happy update reward/bribe (to continue)

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

thank you,
ginny