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for Love through the ages

by onelife2251

person Patty530
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I'm a hopeless romantic, but it's nice to see a story that doesn't revolve around the sex scenes. They're nice in their place but.... Keep up the good work.
person WTW
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! Another chapter up! I bet Sessy's mate was up set that she didn't get to partake in her own revenge with the naughty demoness. Fun stuff! Can't wait to hear more since you have much plans on the future chapters with the other characters. Short but sweet chapter. Keep it up hun!
person Patty530
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Keep up the good work.
person WTW
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh how wonderful to have a new chapter up so soon. Great job. And I LOOVVVEE rain and storms. I'm so with you on that.

By the way, i do have some little question reguarding your story. What ever happend to Jaken and Rin? I'm assuming that the other wolf princess that was supposed to be with Koga wont be mentioned, which I don't mind. ^^ Just wanted to know what happend to Rin really. I also wanted to know about Inuyasha's and Kags reunion. It was pretty fast. but You are the boss! ^^ Keep it up hun.
person Patty530
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. It's a wonderful story. I can't wait to see how it all comes out.
person WTW
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! ^^ You said you like reveiws and you desirve more of them. I'm loving your OC characters. Very fun mix of humor and adventurous mystery here.

I wish to have seen some more interaction with Kag and Inuyasha. After all, he hasn't seen her in so long. Poor guy.

I trust you know what your doing with the plot thought. ^^ Keep it up hun. Your doing great.

Oh and by the way, in the manga, Kikyo finally does die for good. But the way that it happends kinda makes you feel sorry for her. XP As bad as that sounds,lol. Here is the link if you'd like to see the scandalation for it: http://adinuyasha.thebrokenconsole.com/archive.html

I'd love to see Sessy and his mate finally say they love each other. I like how you always place how the male has to work for the girl. Good going on that.

Again, I love your OC's. Ash is really adroable. I love how she puts up with Sessy with out batting an eye. More power to her, lol.

Thanks for writing. I hope to see some more chapters up soon when ever you can.
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah HUH! more intrigues!!

hoping everything has settled down a bit so you can write more (selfish aren't i?).

poor kags and yash, didn't get to spend enough time together. *frowns* stupid secret society...

happy you're back!
ginny
person Diane
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it but just to let you know you have rampant where/were errors in chapter 1 at least. I think the only place you use where correctly is when Sess asks Taijina where she's going, pretty much everything else should be were & in 1 place near the end possibly ware like beware where she says Where demons. It's like she's a toddler asking where the demons are in that instance.
person Blackcrescendo
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another good chapter. Keep em coming!!!
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it isn't the 'get rid of the jewel society' (whatever) is it? whatever did happen to the jewel anyway? you'd think that more important things would have taken priority in the 500 years since, like the development of nuclear weapons, the jewel is somewhat redundant as there are so many ways to kill that even the jewel wouldn't make one invincable... money is power in the present not brute strength as it once was.

good chapter, you still have to watch the malapropisms... through or threw, there or their or they're etc.

ja!
ginny