rate_review Reviews

keep going i love it

Oh my...This story is HOT! I can't wait until Sesshomaru comes in! Thanks for posting this!

OMG!!!...I love this fucking story ( no pun intended )



PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!!!




Thanks

will Miroku join in...and where dose Sesshoumaru come into the story...OMG the suspense is killing me!



please post lots of new chapters very fucking soon!!!

Pleas continue the story!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I am not entirely sure exactly where you are wanting to take this story. So far I find it very interesting, kind of dark but that is what you are going for. Once I see more, I will have a better formed opinion on this. But, so far it is a really good story.

(Break down your paragraphs a bit though. Makes it easier to read and understand.)

Have great and safe holidays.

This is definitely a twist. Not to say that I like what Inuyasha has become, but I'm sure you're going to remedy that, yes? I hope you paint Sesshoumaru as the white knight, her savior as he truly is. Also, one little hint...break up your paragraphs and your dialog. It makes for easier reading, and easier to understand. That's all the tips for today! I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve.

Ja ne! ~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness