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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* awe!!! *sniff*
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for your 1st fic, bad at all.
I like it. Can't wait till you next one
which I hope it's out soon ;)
I like it. Can't wait till you next one
which I hope it's out soon ;)
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really cute. It almost seemed like a beautiful love poem/letter from someone who is declaring there feelings. Well written, just make it more, how to say it... Uhumuhum... Ah ha O_O more of a story, you know like writting more between the people 'talking more between them'... Anyway... I give you rate 5, would give you 100 if there were ^.^
You Rock ☻☻☻
You Rock ☻☻☻
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME! I never really review fan fics anymore because most of it isn't even worth my time (I'm an English freak and am in AP English). However, this story took the cake, literally (I threw up) just kidding, I LOVED IT!!!! I could actually imagine Kagome's face as she was waking up and the groggy smile she gave Inuyasha! That takes talent. Yeah, I LOVE your simple, easy to read, but extremely meaningful writing style. Keep up the GREAT work! Oh yeah, thanks for sharing your story!