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for Loveless: Battle of the Heart

by silverwing

person Eta
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this great begin!
It's amusing your writing style, full of sympathy. I love also the story. I hope you can update it soon!!!
person Mac
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start up. I like the pairing and I wonder where you're going with this. I also wonder how kohaku figures into these things. You id have a misspelling, you missed a d on the end of a word. Run through again to check your spelling. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
person SkatCat
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like the beginnings of a very intresting story. I always wondered what a battle would be like between Kagura and Sesshomaru, but even more, I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops, I think they go very nicely together.
This pair is one of my all time favs so I can't wait for the next chap! Keep up the great work!
person SodaPop
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kagura and Sesshomaru are my favorite couple, please update soon! Please, please, please!!! Sounds like a cool fic!
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More fanfare... Hooray! Happy Holidays everyone...

Anyway, the idea was a oneshot, but I didn't want people to lose interest. I know I am really slow at adding and updating, I apologise. But this type of writing takes alot out of me, and I don't have alot of time, so I do what I can.

This was meant to be a oneshot. I am not sure where/how things will go from here on out. This week is busy with Holiday, so maybe if I am in the writing mood, I will try to work on it this weekend.

Later guys, and thx for the reviews.

~Vee~
person Inu-midoriko
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heyhey,
good job.
update soon
person saRa fReaK
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!! it seems an interesting story. I love this couple