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aw damn.

jesus. sessho. jesus.

please update soon. im hooked.

more more the story is real good and it mada me cry in some part of the story and when will he found out the they are one.person. i hope that they found each other or kegame give the ring back

I adore the comedy in this story along with the intensity of emotions you display in the characters within. It is a excellent story that has me hooked please please update as soon as you can.

funny yet sad....funny because she called him a....*coughs to prepare voice for a long repeat with no breaths* "A CONCEITED, ARROGANT, EGOTISTICAL, SELF RIGHTEOUS, CHAUVANISTIC, PIG HEADED JACKASS, YOU ARE SICK AND TOTALLY DEMENTED!!??" then she demands he give her back her shoe. This was hallarious to read! :D
I, myself, felt a twist in my gut when she started crying in that small corner of her office. And when she watched Sesshy and the evil bitch Kagura walk out, after he had given her the orders for those tickets. I think you should have 'kagome' talk to 'takara' and have 'takara' say that she can't or wont marry/mate him, because he hurt her friend and her friend told her about how he and kagura were close and haveing sex regularly. She, 'takara' could then explain how 'she' would/could never marry/mate a demon or man who would have sex with another woman while engaged to another woman. And she, 'takara' could then tell Sesshy that if he wanted to truly mate her, then he shouldn't have been going on a three day buisness trip with another woman, and should have at least told her about it! Also, you could have 'takara' say that she and kagome would/will be leaving later that day to go back to -where ever they were before the reunion- and would Not be comeing back, or at least she wasn't. She, 'takara' could then walk out or away from Sesshy, leaving him there, stund into silence (i know! that would be funny yet sad, right!?) and him not having utered a single word, at all!!!!
Well, thats just an idea i had, maybe, if you want, you can/could use it....maybe? (hopeful look)
Well, UP-DATE SOON!!!
TTYL;
megan

enjoying this a ton. lots of fun, can't wait to see what happens next. I like the beast, heh

OOO I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!

Thank you for updating. I loved it and hope to see more of it soon.

loved it

Eh.. like this story is bomb man! You need to update! like i know how she can get out of the bind and like make Sesshou really jealous. She can give magic someone else as 'Takara' and that someone else can take Kagome's place as Sesshou's intended and she can go on her merry way to sexy Menomaru. I always thought he was cute and wished someone would add him as a love triangle. hehe. ANYWAYS and Sesshou would be so effin' pissed when he sees Kagome with him and like he totally forgets about 'Takara' and like gets all posessivy. lol hehe maybe that can help with some of you writers block seeing as how you haven't updated in a while.

I really am looking forward to your next update. Please e-mail me when you do post up the next chapter. I would greatly appreciate and love you forever! hehe. LATER

I hope that you return to this story soon. You stopped just when it was getting interesting. Keep it up.