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for Just a Little Rivalry

by BeautifulOblivion

person madmiko
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Am so loving the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. As for what I'd like to see happen? Hmmmmn. I don't want Sess to mess things up for Kag and Inu, but I would love for her to get them both as mates! So, perhaps Sess should do a little pursuing, while Inu does a little stewing before something happens and the brothers bond and decide to share her. Perhaps something to do with Naraku and crew -- maybe Sess helps save/protect her. He and Inu work together to get her back. Maybe there's some kind of old custom about brothers sharing a mate? Their father may have to intervene to tell them about the possibility. I don't know!! But, I can't wait to see what you do! Loving the tension in the meantime! I hope you write more soon!
person Danny Girl
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 is great I just love it. Sesshomaru should tell
Kagome how he feels as a reader see what her reaction
will be. I can't wait till the next up.
Till next update. Have a safe and happy
Holiday ok.
person Inusgirl
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i just wanted to say that your story rocks @ loud!!!! and i mean everything ...i really don't have any critisism because i found everything great..soo yeah...well keep updating and i'll keep reading ....keep up the good work

sincerely,
one of your newest fans
Inusgirl
person madmiko
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I love the way you've played around with the way everyone is related to or knows everyone else. You've started having Sess explain his feelings about Kagome -- I'll be interested to see how it turns out. (I think he should love her, too. Who wouldn't? It'd be funny to see him as a second mate -- subservient to Inuyasha in those domestic matters -- ha!) Can't wait to see what Naraku and Muso are up to and how they plan to carry out their dastardly deeds. This is a fun fic in many ways!
person Danny Girl
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for answering my question and for the shout out, you know I love this story right?
Now on with the review. Your story is getting better and better. I do have a questions though, and you
don't have to answer it because I think I'm getting ahead of the story, but why is Naraku so bold as to
go after Kagome then Kikyo? Why I ask is because in the earlier chapters everyone thought Inuyasha hurt
kikyo. I know,I know, I see the smile on your face and the shake of your head saying keep reading, keep
reading. I guest I'll do just that. Till next update stay safe and happy ok ;)
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story!

Keep up the good work!

:)
person InuGoddess715
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I just found it last night and woke up this morning still reading it. I finally finished, and I really liked what I've read so far. The character relationships are good and the plot sounds interesting. I will definitely be reading and reviewing from now on.
person Danny Girl
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 is great, really love it. I like in the this story that when Inuyasha changed
he looked more like his father and brother that was good. In this story is Rin the adoptive
daughter of Sesshoumaru or his parents? And finally, 2 things, 1. thanks for updating quickly
to keep this story interesting and 2. Thanks a lot for the shout out this reviewer bows to you.
Till next update stay safe and happy ;)
person Hiromi
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far! I was disappointed when I thought Sesshomaru wouldn't be home for the weekend but I thought he might unexpectedly show up and I was right! I luv when Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are together(Not in that way!) becuz the fights or insults always make the story more interesting.
person madmiko
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has been fun and enjoyable to read so far! Looking forward to what happens next. I'm intrigued by Sesshoumaru's feelings for her, too. Gonna do anything with that?