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for Just a Little Rivalry

by BeautifulOblivion

person Lord Of The Flames
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I wonder what will happen.....
person madmiko
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I like the way they're concerned about her lack of reaction -- they should be. Isn't Inuyasha a doll to take her shopping -- without complaining?!!? (Where can I find a hanyou like that?) I like it that Kouga is staying with them now, and that Sess keeps coming over. What has he been thinking ever since the night of the incident? And I was wondering if the culprits were ever going to show back up -- is it them at the movie theatre? Are they going to cause more trouble? I'm still surprised that was all they did to her. Awesome cliffhanger for the chapter! I can't wait for your next update!! This is such a cool fic!
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18 is just great, This is the calm before the storm
I love the cliff hanger, When Inuyasha and Kagome are at the
movies and Inuyasha smells them there. Please update soon
I can't wait till the comfrontation.
person Lord Of The Flames
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for letting every body know that I'm your mate. (Grins) But good chapter though. Need to update soon.
person madmiko
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter! Kagome's attitude does seem quite strange, doesn't it? But, I loved the Kagome/Sess interaction and Inuyasha being grateful to his brother for staying to help her. I was also glad Inu finally came back to be with her. Stupid macho need for revenge taking front and center stage over comforting his mate and showing her he'd protect her and still loved her. *grumble, grumble* Men! (Demons! -- whatever.) :) I can't wait for your next installment!!
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you update I love this story. What's up
with Sess is he falling in love with his brother's
mate? What is Naraku hiding? Who is the girl Inuyasha saw
with a bite mark? Anyway love this chapter can't wait till
the next update. Oh, Happy Holidays (sorry it's late) :)
person Priestess Mia
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo!! What is going to happen next?? I must know, so please update!! ^^
person dj
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story and they should get hurt becuase rape is a horrible thing. But I don't think Kagome and Sessomaru should have anything between them becuase her and Inyuasha are happy. Besides who goes after there brothers wife after she was raped and is in a bad mental state.
person madmiko
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was so excited to see chapters 15 and 16 up! I was a little surprised Naraku and Muso didn't do more to her -- and they left her very much alive, so they have to know they'll be hunted. Loved the Inu/Kagome interaction AND the Sess/Kagome interaction at the end. You've got me on the edge of my seat! What will happen between S/K and how will Inu feel about it? And poor Kagome will be traumatized for a while over the whole ordeal she went through. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next!! I hope you get a chance to update SOON!! Loving it!
person madmiko
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me again. Had to comment further after reading some of the other reviews. I really don't think it comes across as Sess going after his brother's girl while she's vulnerable. When I read it, it seemed like he was really just trying to comfort her. I think his "inner demon" was starting to come out because he does care for (maybe love) her, but I didn't feel like you were writing it like he was going to DO anything to her. Hey, we all know he has too much honor for that, right? I'd say, if he wants a relationship with her, my guess is that he would tell Inuyasha first. That's just my take on his character. I can't wait to see where you go with this. (And no matter what direction you take, I'll still be reading and cheering you on! This is some good writing!)