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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cute.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the BEST story I have read in a LONG time!! It was so wonderful, I actually had tears in my eyes when I finished. . . .You have some wonderful talent goin on!! Keep em coming!!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the other reviewer that you should put space between teh paragraphs to make it easier to read, but other than that I found this to be the a really good beginning. I will be keeping an eye out for updates to see where this goes.
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed it. it was definately different, but in a good way.
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure this is a really good story, but it's hard to read due to the spacing issues. Separate your paragraphs and sentences of dialogue better so that it's less of a strain on the reader's eyes.