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for Sugar & Spice

by LdyMoon

person Sea storm
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whooa what kind of woman is she and long may she reign lol keep up the good work lol...
person air bender
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee hee that's so great I LOVE THIS SPAINISH lady lol she is so smooth.....
person DARK TOUCH
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey there ldymoon I haven't read this kind of story from you she is one sexy senorita thats deadly lol wow my girlfriends are going to try this on some of our guys lol........can't wait till you update ok...chris said to tell you that your sugar and spice sounds sexy as HELL and he'd love to have her number....I know he is so sad lol but we love it and we want more much more lol I can't wait for sesshy what a scene that will be my mouth is welding up with salive just thinkin about it.....
person NEPTUNE'S SEA
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I FEEL that this THE first story that is wrot this way where did you get this thought hell keep it going and go to different world aside from inuyasha I love this ladymoon please keep this up.
person Breath deep
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
smiling sheepishly (eyes shifting from side to side) MORE MORE that's all I gotta say.
person GLAZE
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THis is one sexy bitch and I want to be her lol I'd trade my boring life for hers any day.
person DEEP BLU
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want that sexy accent and I want the sexy heels let me be the killer assasin and have the men all the men except the ones that suck in bed (sorry naraku) lol you were my favorite charactor lol......not anymore though.....
person U know U wanna
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the puns love Ginta never thought that the little guy could be so what is the word yummy oh yes just yummy..... please have more yummmy scenes lol
person The real Hotaru
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I only have three things to say!

one: I would like to say I'm so happy you are writing a new story. You always have such good ideas.

Two: This story was sooooo funny. Any one who don't think so must not laugh much.

Three: I can't wait to read more.

:)
person The real Hotaru
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. It was hot! Let me let you know, Kouga can swim in my lake any time for free, so send him over this way. Oh, and I like how you gave Ginta such a high score for being tender. Loved it. Now hurry up and give me more.