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for Sugar & Spice

by LdyMoon

person entropy9
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
better than i though it'd be. a few grammar mistakes, but it's very nice...sexy, cute...i lik eit.
it would be funny if the perfect 20 turned out to be someone unexpected like hojou...omg and i can't wait for the miroku one...too bad the miroku an dinuyasha ones would prolly hurt sango and kagome, curious to see how you'll deal with that...how are you even gonna get inuyasha away from kagome? and don't forget the seven dead guys...bankotsu or whatever, he's in alot of fics, save sesshomaru for one of the last...just a suggestion (it'll keep people waiting, lol)
good luck, keep it up.. work on your spelling errors (just have someone else look over it)
later!
person The real Hotaru
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Sota!!! She is soo freaken cool and I wish I was her. Can't wait to see who's next on the list (hope it's Inuyasha *wink-wink*) Please up date soon.

P.S. This story was HOT. I'm happy she was able to finally get Kouga ;)
person 4urizonly
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thinks its funny and honest update soon plz
person honey brown sugaz
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update its cool represent the latinas!!!
person Mirokus dream
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've took the time out to read your stories today I clicked on your name and started to pick at the stories. This story is so very different from your other ones you've made them as they are anime characters but, using science she is able to go into the anime and have her way with them for that...it is genious. I wish that could happen for real and then...I'll have my way with them too especially Miroku. I'd love to f**k that hentai monk into oblivion. Anyway, can't wait for his rating please make it good, please pretty please don't depress me. I know I am so sad U__U I like Ginta too, you made him so...yum yum and oh, Hakaku hell yeah he deserved to be punched and Kouga...dreamy. Til your next chapter.

Carmen
person anon
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thsi is funny and sexy keep it up
person kougasbyatch
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My stomach muscles hurt I can't believe you gave Naraku that rating, I always found him darker and sexier, but oh my god I can see it from your eyes please keep it up. And I loved Ginta oh my I think I fell in love with him too, I want to see more fan fiction with him init if he's going to be so damn hot can't wait to see Koga's score!!!!
person seiryu
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hurry and write another one damn it and I am waiting on Betrayals Gift as well, I love the webs you weave woman.
person ldyneptune
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it Naraku can you say he stinks in bed ha ha I never would have never thought how would score so low all those dark looks are nothing but a rip lol(excuse me while I giggle) but I have alwasy thought something so dark and utterly sexy and the dude can't even give a good kiss man poor baby needs H.E.L.P. lol keep up the great work.
person Moon Princess
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow love it want more come on I love the lust in the air....please write more..... lol