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for Taisho Promise

by SesshouLover2010

person sweetkijo
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. It breaks my heart that this shit accually happens. I was the fat girl in middle school to become the skinny fit girl in high school. It is crazy that the same fools who made fun accually wanted to date me. I saw them for the ugly people they were..it is sad that people cannot just see people for who the are and for what they offer the world. Ugg, it pisses me off to no end. Your story is well written and I love it. Keep up the great work.
person Autumn
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well First off I love this story. I mean I'm heavier set and so it kind of touched me. I love how Inuyasha is portrayed as the jerk we all know he is deep down. Second of all I hope you update very soon! I need more of this story!
person unknown
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. It shows the events that happen to average weight girls in school before and now. Good Job Jaxxia7 and SessandKagFan! Keep On! :)
person Fred
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please have the decency to modify your summary. A One-Shot is a story that is posted all at once, complete. If you are updating with new material on any kind of regular or semi-regular basis, then the story is NOT a One-Shot. This is not to say that your fic is not good, just that you have miscategorized your fic. It is clearly NOT a One-Shot and there is no way that it could ever be.
person Laini
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,i actually like this fic.Pretty darn good.I actually read a fic similiar to this one..well not THAT similiar the plot was different but yea.Update soon cant wait to read more. ^_^
person lala_land
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool story update but is thi slike happining ot you?? pesonaly i feel sorry for those people who gets bully,
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*big grin* What could those conditions be? I can hardly wait to find out. I am really enjoying this story and I can relate to Kagome being picked on. I am also a heavy woman, and have been teased unmercifully in school and out. I hope that it all comes out better for Kagome in the end.
person wynter89
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you updated... i was waiting for sooo long for this chapter. it is very interesting....

good luck
i hope you update soon

i love it!
person Chains
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very good. i liked it a lot update soon.
person tru
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. i as well am a well proportioned female. Even when I get down to a weight that is healthy and where all the docs say i should be I still look chubby. Go below a certain weight and my ribs make me look like an anorexic. I can so understand where kagome is coming from and i like the idea that she is still nice and still has friends. I hope Sess doesn't go too hard on her heck she just got beat up for trying to be a good friend. And what right does he really have he shouls have corrected inu. But then i think in this fic you have him with a lot on his mind and he respects Kagome so maybe he thought she could handle it. Oh well Thank you so much for updating and I hope you update soon because I really want to know what happens. I know this rambles a bit but I think it shows a little more interest and appreciation than just the screamed update soon. Thanks for sharing your imagination with we the readers. Tru