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i cried so much, please continue writing

Wow! I really like this story, of course I always like stories that make me cry. It's kind of hard to believe that people would actually treat a fat person like this though, or maybe I just grew up in a nice place that didn't really care about how fat somebody was. I don't think I ever heard anybody making fun of a another person because of their weight. Plus 190 doesn't seem too far over weight, maybe like 60 pounds over? It's not like she was 300lbs and her thighs were eating her lower leags and in turn her lower legs were eating her ankles right? But again lol anything that can make me cry is good in my book.

nooooo... i was sooo getting into it... sniffles... and i wont be able to check if you updated for the next three weeks.
good luck
i hope you update soon

interesting
but sessy is really acting oc

The story is really good. Though I must say... the kids in her school must be totally evil if she only weighed 190 pounds and they're beating the shit out of her. I weighed between 210 and 230 the whole time I was in highschool (though I've lost 50 pounds since then), and I was NEVER picked on. I mean, some mean people might make a comment about it every once in a while, but really I never had any real problems with anyone. I just wanted to say that. Anyway... I like the story! :D

I loved this chapter!!! Please up-date soon!!! Poor Kagome!!!

This was so good you need to update soon. I hope that Sesshoumaru kicks Inuyasha's ass.

it was great keep it up!!

Wow,

All I can say is WOW!!. This last chapter made me cry, because it really hit home and made me remember that I was and still am a lot like Kagome in highschool. (over weight and picked on.)

I really hope to see more. Can you email me when you update?

Thanks

Really good. I like AU stories and this one is written very well. Please update soon.