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for The Redemption of Raizen

by kimisan

person Chickadee01
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I like it!! It's most obvious that you are just gonna make this thing a passing fling between Raizen and Kagome and something more permanent between Yusuke and Kagome. I can't wait for your second chappy... Don't make me wait too long!!!
person Shivers
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. This is only the first chapter and I'm already hooked.. Good Job.
Please update soon.
person Belle
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo nice, I'm interested now. Do continue soon. You've captured Raizen and Inuyasha beautifully.
person Helen
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story you have here. I certainly hope you do continue with it. I can't wait for Raizen and Kagome to actually meet. Besides, this pairing has never been done to my knowledge. Well, until next time. Ja ne.
person lilly
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! I am so happy you are writing again. I have looked and looked for a while know and I see you have not been updated as much. I really missed your stories and I hope you finish the ones you have not finished yet. I like the story and I am looking forward to read more in the future.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Characterizations are perfect, I love the indifference Raizen showed towards Inuyasha. It's probably a good thing for Inuyasha that was his reaction anyway. Even with the Tetsusaiga I have no doubts Raizen would be able to hand Inuyasha his ass on a silver platter. Awesome chapter my Queen. Update soon please. *Express mails a box of Hiei cookies*
person Kage Otome (NSI)
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow another wonderful story in the works! Certainly a unique pairing Kagome/Raizen, I've certainly never seen something quite like this before! It's a wonderful start! I can't wait to see more!

~Kage
person xoulblade
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please add more, this is a beginning of a wonderful story!! Update soon!
person sendosha
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great idea, I´ve never seen Raizen to take an active part in a story. Very unique!
person azurephoenix
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was interesting please update soon.