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April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh. Continue, please continue I want to read more. Please.
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April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh. Continue, please continue I want to read more. Please.
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April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, since the original review I left was deleted when the site crashed, I'll leave you another. I really liked the first chapter and I hope you plan on continuing this fic (maybe at Fic Haven and/or Mediaminer.org?). While this chapter did seem a little strange, since Raizen seems to be almost stalking Kagome and her group, it's different. That's a good thing. I can honestly say your story is completely original. I have never seen a R+K story. I'm very curious as to where you're going with this.
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting beginning :) Though I am wondering how Kagome will eventually end up with Yusuke... I would love to read more of this story :)
Thank you and please update soon
xxxx Aria-Chan
Thank you and please update soon
xxxx Aria-Chan
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_o GAAAH! I'm hooked! How do you do it?! *cries* All of your stories are SO good. I don't understand... It's only the first chapter!! *fustrated* I hate your job(s). It keeps you guys from writing all of your wonderful stories. You should quit! Become writers full-time. That whole starving artist life may fit you, you know?
But seriously. This was a good first chapter. I'm happy that you started another story, but at the same time I'm a little upset. But at least you haven't completely fallen off the face of the Earth like SOME people. *cough*SkrikingFalcon*cough* We're hanging here waiting for the next chapter of 'The Power of Seven', 'A Live Unlived' and 'Twisted Accusations', and you come out with another great story? How dare you! You're not supposed to make us suffer through more than one cliffhanger at a time. Don't you know this?
A little weird that Kagome would just leave the wounded man lying on the ground and go into the hut, but I guess that's okay. He's wounded afterall. ~_^ But how's this going to work? Is Kagome going to fall in love with Raizen then come home and then after he dies, fall in love with his great grandson (aka Yusuke) while greiving in her time? I hope so. Any other way would be icky. *shivers thinking of semi-incest*
Well, good chapter. I hope you can come up with some ideas and update this story soon. It's really hard to find good story these days, yet you keep popping out all these masterpieces. *wonders* Please share your secret with the other, less talented authors. Ja mata~!
~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
But seriously. This was a good first chapter. I'm happy that you started another story, but at the same time I'm a little upset. But at least you haven't completely fallen off the face of the Earth like SOME people. *cough*SkrikingFalcon*cough* We're hanging here waiting for the next chapter of 'The Power of Seven', 'A Live Unlived' and 'Twisted Accusations', and you come out with another great story? How dare you! You're not supposed to make us suffer through more than one cliffhanger at a time. Don't you know this?
A little weird that Kagome would just leave the wounded man lying on the ground and go into the hut, but I guess that's okay. He's wounded afterall. ~_^ But how's this going to work? Is Kagome going to fall in love with Raizen then come home and then after he dies, fall in love with his great grandson (aka Yusuke) while greiving in her time? I hope so. Any other way would be icky. *shivers thinking of semi-incest*
Well, good chapter. I hope you can come up with some ideas and update this story soon. It's really hard to find good story these days, yet you keep popping out all these masterpieces. *wonders* Please share your secret with the other, less talented authors. Ja mata~!
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great first chapter. I cant wait to see how this will play out. Keep up the good work^^
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. I want to know what Raizen does next. Please update again soon.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
But of course I want to see more! Never seen a Raizen/Kagome pairing but I am sure it will be wonderful, since it is written by you. AND you have Yusuke/Kagome coming somehwere too which makes me oh so happy.
Nice start my friend. Can't wait to see how Kagome reacts to Raizen. No doubt it will be much the same reaction she gives Sesshoumaru.
*hands you Youko cookies*
Nice start my friend. Can't wait to see how Kagome reacts to Raizen. No doubt it will be much the same reaction she gives Sesshoumaru.
*hands you Youko cookies*
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've never seen or even considered this pairing before! Its really good so far, so update soon.