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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woooo, that was very sad, but very lovingly too :D i'm very curious, go on with ur story, please?!? ^_^
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...This is great! It struck me as interesting! It's a great start, please continue!
- --The Bunny Under Your Bed
- --The Bunny Under Your Bed
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good, I like it, please update soon. Its sad, but I'm hopeing its gets better.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its alright for first chapter
but maybe u should try to
use a diffrent font
but maybe u should try to
use a diffrent font
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love what the story is so far. It pulls at your heart. Please continue. I would love to read more of it.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. Such angst. I find this intriguing and will go on to read the next chapter.
Snowfall
Snowfall