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for Pain Stricken Memories

by InuYashaMoon

person herb
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
niccce
person alexis
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i totally love it i wish i could write like this please continue this story is great
person Cory
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY KICKED A LOT OF ASS INUYASHAMOON! I'M A HUGE HUGE INUYASHA FAN!!! I HOPE YOU COME UP WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER CAUSE I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!!! YOU RULE! ;)
person inu5
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it what was seh doing that stuipd gril i need to no quick and post the next chapter.
person howlingblue
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting first chapter....

I thought that it was pretty good...

The characters seemed good, and the details as well...

The only thing that truly annoyed me was the way you spaced.....

fix the spacing, and your next attempt should be great!
person shadow of death
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Good and interesting. Please continue. Will read.
person xcinamaticxstarx
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i must say im interested in this story! please update a soon as possible! :-D
person LInda_Kagome
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BEAUIFUL O.O
person The Grim Reaper
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do not know what is happening with your formatting, but if you are copying and pasting into the text box in order to post it, you can keep the formatting by putting, without spaces, < p r e > at the very top of the document, and < / p r e > at the end of the document. This may not work if you are posting by downloading the document. Also, you write so well that I do not understand why you do not have a five star rating. Do you know if you have a stalker attempting to keep your ratings down? Please email me.

The Grim Reaper
person joy
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww this is so cool and sad but i dont care its amazing!!!