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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go ahead keep it coming.......
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee...interesting chapter, and Rin's such a lucky girl! >,< I mean really, is it have a greek god stand in front of them with only a waist wrap early in the morning? Nope...not me! Lucky Rin-chan! ^_~ Keep up the great work too! I love it! Hee hee hee...
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must have more!!!!!!! ^_-
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee...sorry for not reviewing for a while...^-^; I was kind of..busy at the moment so yeah. Got a lot to do so i wasn't on for a while. SORRY!!! >,< Good work on the chapters though, keep it up! Though, there's a whole lot more of Kagome and Inuyasha than Rin and Sesshoumaru. ^-^;
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job so far....keep it up!!!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"She decided to help him find his way through the dark, though it was still the blind leading the blind." That line was just beautiful. Poetic and gorgeouse. I might use it for the poetry/stories I write. Cliffhangers are going to be the death of me if I keep reading stories that ALWAYS have a cliffhanger. But they're alright cuz they leave your readers wanting. Good chapter.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg please update it is getting really really good
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please, soon!!!!!
Likeed it , like it, will like it, never doubt that!
Likeed it , like it, will like it, never doubt that!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"He was done with her for now, but tommorow she could decide what would happen next, tonight she belonged to him."
Hmm... I wonder what Rin can ask for tommorow???? tee hee hee =^.^=
PS- awesome, and it's good to see love in these types of fics along w/ some lust.
Hmm... I wonder what Rin can ask for tommorow???? tee hee hee =^.^=
PS- awesome, and it's good to see love in these types of fics along w/ some lust.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm relly liking this one. hope you keep at it. i get sad when i read a good fan fic and the writer just gives up on it:'( anyway. really good work on this one. and your grammer is a hella lot better. deuce.
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