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for Lost Souls

by sendosha

schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting story so far. im looking forward to finding out what will b happening next.
person madmiko
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a sad beginning! But I really like the woman Kagome has matured into. I like the idea of her wolf companions, too. She has met Hiei now, and saved him. This should be interesting. Will the whole story be set in the Feudal Era, or will she eventually find a way to return to her time? That would be so strange and difficult for her to adjust to after all this, wouldn't it? But her poor mother and Souta and grandfather don't know what happened to her. Why did the well stop working? I hope she can find and defeat Naraku before Miroku's wind tunnel consumes him. And she's going to meet Youko, too, huh? I just can't wait to see what you have in mind here. This is awesome!
person ptbear
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad but good. Update soon. Can't wait to see how you bring in Youko and Hiei into the story and what Kagome plans for Naraku.
person madmiko
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a promising start!! It's been a while since you've added to this -- hope you haven't dropped it. It's really too good to let go. I hope you get a chance to write more soon!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Ryukotsusei
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if the person she ended up seeking out to help her train was Youko. He seems most likely, being a master of energy though Hiei would also be a good prospect most likely. It looks good, cant wait to read more. Update soon please
person badkitty
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sad....I like it! So is Kagome stuck in the past? Update soon, you've got the start of something good.
person Seiteki(nsi)
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh so sad *cries* pleas update soon
person Kage Otome (NSI)
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Living only for revenge...What a sad existence, hopefully Hiei and Kurama (Yoko) Can give her a reason to live, will they be from the future or from the past? Keep up the good work, I love it!