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for Under The Stars

by XxstealerxX

person Meagan
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really have to finish this story and very quickly too! I can't wait to read the rest of it. Thanx!
person Kiba
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!!! YOU MUST FINISH!!!!~!! I WILL DIE IF YOU DON'T!!!!! (translation: Love your writing, PLEASE finish this story)
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
suggestion... MAKE YOUR CHAPTERS LONGER! it will attract more
readers if you keep them enthralled on one chapter longenough
they will flock to read more. you should put more of your plot on
display... i'm not sosure what you are wanting to do yet....
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE PLEASE
person rin.dee
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how.. invigorating!
haha!
please continue ^_^
person brittany
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it i want to read more!!!!!1 im so abosesn with these i really want to see how it ends:(
person mary
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, please continue.
person Lyndsay
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story, please update ASAP!!!!!!!
person C. T. Rae
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoyng this so far, please continue! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! *Inu-chibi jumping up and down on Kouga-chibi... "Thats for trying to take my bitch from me!" Inu-chibi hugs Kagome-chibi, petting her hair "my bitch... good bitch..."* err... um, yea, CONTINUE!!! plz?

Mistress of the Dark
C. T. Rae
person joy
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet plz keep the story up i love it!!!!