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for Surprising Love

by WhiteWolfTemptress

person Sugahigh nurse
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was very cute and I hope you continue it soon. little tips from pediatric nurse, most pergnancies only have 3 months of morning sickness and only happens very occasionally the rest of the term. but there are some people who have it during the whole 9 months just like they are some that don't have morning sickness at all. But those cases are extremly rare. so 6 to 7 months is of MS is rare but it is your story so please write like you want. just thought you might want to know
person Indira
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please finish.
great story.
this is a VERY new side of Sesshi that I'll love to see more of.
keep up the good work.
person Jazmine
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shard
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very nice story, the plot and characters all react so well together. I look forward to reading more.
person a
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was very good
UPDATE SOOON!!
person MidnightStar
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. I like the plot. Will wait for your next update.

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person anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so what happened that Kagome left the group? Why would she leave Sango & Miroku. Doesn't she still need to find the shards especially now that Kikyo is gone? She is the only one that can purify it or did she loose her miko powers when Sessy gave her his blood? Sorry to ask so many questions but I am a bit confused. why did he have to give her his blood to begin with I know to save her.... but his father's sword could have brought her back after she died and she would have been all healed. Anyway update soon
person sassy
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She is pregnant is't a boy or a girl.I hope it is both.
person ReneeRoberts
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it it is very good n written weel n i hope u update soon!
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are soooo mean! I love it so far and can't wait to read more.