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for Surprising Love

by WhiteWolfTemptress

person ptbear
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read what Inuyasha tries to do.
person phxazkyote
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a wonderful story. Especially if you are including whats going on with your own pregnancy. Please update soon. That is if you can still reach the keyboard. lol.
person Sankontesou
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dunnnn!!
this story is soo great!!
please update again soon
and what does 'koi' mean??
person Shannon
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
suspense! Why take kagome? lol I gess i must read on to find out. Nice opening chapter
person Shannon
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think "Let go of me" would have been the last thing to come out of my mouth if I just plummeted to the ground. I think that my first reactin would have been to check and see if I peed my pants. Then I would have attempted to beat the ever leaving daylights out of Sesshomaru. Then I would have screamed every swear word in the dictionar and even made some up. After all of that I think mabe then I would have said "Get off me" But thats just my opinion. On with the show.
person brandi
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this story and i hope that you continue it!!...this is my first time using this site, usually i use fanfiction.net or a single spark but i have been told this was a good site as well...i dont know how this site works, if u send me an e-mail when u update or if i have to check to see if u updated daily...i have NO idea...if u could e-mail me that would be really GREAT...my e-mail is jeering_smiles@hotmail.com again i enjoyed ur story, its kind of nice to read a story that doesnt have a MILLION and ten spelling and grammatical errors...please e-mail when u update!!!!!
THANK YOU
-Brandi
person scary miss mary
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is soo cool write more please!!!!! i love your story its just great
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it
person judzea
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story thus far...please keep writing and updating. I look for updates everyday :)
person Maxdezbell
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM


^_^ Love this story :) keep up the good work!!