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for Breathless

by Animefangirl81

person chanda
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uggg that was short, oh please update soon maybe after turkey day.. that would be great..LOl Oh and dont forget your disclaimer.


Happy Holidays
Chanda
person chanda
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you updated, what a great start keep up the great writing...
person Aleke
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING! Oh and a very happy turkey day to you as well! Anywho, please continue with this story, I absolutly adore it and I'm only two chapters in....PLEASE!
person lithium88
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter!! I don't think i've read a storyline such as this one before, but I'm glad your story will be the first! ^_^ Not sure here you're gonna take this story or how you'll develop the characters, but that's the beauty of it! I'll keep reading if you keep Updating!! Until your next chappy, take care!
lith*