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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue withyour storie
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Moving along nicely! Damn, Miro is
so cold...but something tells me that
Kikyou deserves it. Looking fwd to
the next update!
so cold...but something tells me that
Kikyou deserves it. Looking fwd to
the next update!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I really like this. So far you are developing your characters very well. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. One little mistake I thought I'd mention though,...after the guys were finished practicing their composition, Miroku set down his "violin." I thought he played the cello?
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is and intersting story. I think I saw it on a different sight, but it was with Inuyasha as a PIANO student, not violin. I'm not saying you stole the story or anything (I don't even know who wrote the other one, if it was you or someone else entirely) but I wanted to point out the difference.
Inuyasha just doesn't seem the type to have the sort of patience to play ANY sort of instrument, let alone one with strings.
I also wanted to know-- is Inuyasha supposed to be human or half-demon in this? Cause you said he has silver hair and walks around bare-foot, but you never mention if he was half-demon or not.
Inuyasha just doesn't seem the type to have the sort of patience to play ANY sort of instrument, let alone one with strings.
I also wanted to know-- is Inuyasha supposed to be human or half-demon in this? Cause you said he has silver hair and walks around bare-foot, but you never mention if he was half-demon or not.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! Im curious as to what happened between Inuyasha and Kikyo, I hope that you will update soon!!!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was a great chapter. I liked the added mystery factor. Keep up the good work. Update soon. EK!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey not a bad start. Not much to go on, but I suppose it's an okay start. The emotions were real enough, I like it. I hope that you update soon. The description promises for a good read. EK!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was really good. I would have loved it to be longer, going into the date and everything, but it is Thanksgiving. Well I hope that you update soon. You did a great job. Inuyasha being nice, now that was a bit of a twist. I personally like it when he is all arrogant and rude, then Kagome changes him. It's fun to see those kinds of fics evolve. Again you did a good job. I hope that you update soon. Have a happy turkey day. EK!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the consept, and the begining is really well done. Keep it up!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love it so far. really cute at the end when inuyasha scrared really cut e how they meet.lol. well update A.S.A.P.
thanks,
Inuyashas Mate
thanks,
Inuyashas Mate