rate_review Reviews

I LOVED it!!! PLEEEAASSSEE continue & finish it soon!!!!

don't realy need tbc. it was a great endding..

THAT WAS AWSOME! make another chapter.

dats so cute..very romantic. so plz. continue soon.

hahaha.. sesshy as a horny dog.. you know.. that's probably how he SHOULD be anyway! why should such a hot demon be endlessly cold and rigid? i liked him in this fic =) good enough to bypass the grammatical errors =P

Tee hee hee....very unique story, I loved it!!! If it is to be continued please coninue again sometime soon, ne? ^_^ I like the whole story...hee hee, though I didn't like how Sesshoumaru was attracted to that evil woman at first...um what was her name again? San...who know? ^-^;' hee he...sorry, I tend to forget the people I don't like at times, but yeah, I like the whole thing, you kept Sesshoumaru in character pretty well...at the end of the chapter was the shocker to me, I thought he was about to rape her....hee hee. But yeah, great job! ^_^

What a sweet story! My only main critique is that you switch from first person ("I" did this) to third person ("she" did this) constantly. Pick a tense. Otherwise, please continue developing your story. It's very romantic.

I loved this! are you going to write anymore?