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June 23, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED it!!! PLEEEAASSSEE continue & finish it soon!!!!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
don't realy need tbc. it was a great endding..
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWSOME! make another chapter.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dats so cute..very romantic. so plz. continue soon.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha.. sesshy as a horny dog.. you know.. that's probably how he SHOULD be anyway! why should such a hot demon be endlessly cold and rigid? i liked him in this fic =) good enough to bypass the grammatical errors =P
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee....very unique story, I loved it!!! If it is to be continued please coninue again sometime soon, ne? ^_^ I like the whole story...hee hee, though I didn't like how Sesshoumaru was attracted to that evil woman at first...um what was her name again? San...who know? ^-^;' hee he...sorry, I tend to forget the people I don't like at times, but yeah, I like the whole thing, you kept Sesshoumaru in character pretty well...at the end of the chapter was the shocker to me, I thought he was about to rape her....hee hee. But yeah, great job! ^_^
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet story! My only main critique is that you switch from first person ("I" did this) to third person ("she" did this) constantly. Pick a tense. Otherwise, please continue developing your story. It's very romantic.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! are you going to write anymore?