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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was wonderful you shouldn't worry so much!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleaz up date this one. It would be nice to see how the rest of the yyh gang takes this.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it was cool so will you write more Heie and Kagome crossover very good
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was one of the better one shots that I have read. Kagome and Hiei pairings are my favorite crossover pairing and you did it beautifully. This would make for the beginning of a great story if you were ever to continue with it. Good Job!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...thats the only word I find coming to me. I don't usually review unless I find something really really good. I LOVE crossovers personally and my favorite pairing is Kagome and Hiei. I absolutly LOVED this one-shot and I highly encourage you take it past that and continue it.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Many one-shot are ... well shot to hell because of the lenght. Really short ones , less than 3 pages, are good for poems and dribles. Semi short ones, 3-5 pages are good for humor and pwp. But for a good lemon that has meat to it, a long one is the only way for a hentai one-shot.
I'm happy to say that this meets that criteria and AHEM performs well. You earned 5+ with this story.
I'm happy to say that this meets that criteria and AHEM performs well. You earned 5+ with this story.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooo don't stay away from the one-shot depart. cause it was really good. even if it was long you pulle d it off amazing i hope you put out more stories
ja ne till next time
ja ne till next time
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sayuri-chan...did you write this just for me and Ryukotsusei? You know, the two of us have been pining for some awesome Hiei/Kagome loving and you have definitely given it to us. I think that this is one of the best one-shots I have ever read. I am thinking you should write a full length fic with those two for the main pairing...I would definitely read it.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY COW! I loved it. I was hoping for another chapter when I realized it was a one-shot. Wink Wink, Nudge nudge? But its your decision of course
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I loved this! It was sooo good!