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i think u should make this into a full fledged story!!! its starting off great, but u could add so much more!!!!! PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE???!!!!!!!!^^..=)

Terrific one-shot! I like the length -- you worked in some good story. Of course, you could do a sequel with Inu's reaction to his mark being over-ridden. (I only mention it because I'm selfish, and I'm such a big fan of your writing. And I love Hiei/Kagome pairings, and there aren't enough good ones out there.) Keep writing!!

omg...that has to be one of my all time favorite kaghiei one shots ever! It was perfict XD but when kags threw her head back when hiei bit her i thought what if there heads colided right then that would totaly ruin the moment lmao u should make a story where kags is a blond and hiei finds out that he has 2 take her as a mate but have it where she drives him insane by teasing him with her body without her knowing it lol i would kill 2 read that anyway i loved your story and i hope u take my idea into consideration! ~tigress~

Ok i already reviewed but i kinda went back and read the story again kus it was soooo good! But i had another idea if ur goin 2 continue this story it would be cute 2 have kags get pregnant with hieis kid XD and one thing im diein 2 know is what type of demon did she turn into?! the suspence is killin me!

that. was. so. SWEET!!!! i never knew he could care that much. the other stories i've read were either really rude or really sappy.

I just thought you should know that someone else has posted this story(as well as a number of stories by other authors) up under their own account on Fanfiction.net. They have stated in their summaries that none of what they've posted is their own writing, but there's still absolutely no notes of credit to the original authors. Not that it would be considered OK if there was. In any case, I found it to be rather fucked up, posting other peoples work and they still demand reviews... and none of the reviewers seemed to notice that the works were not the person's own. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2984788/1/ should be the one that was stolen from you. Just thought you should know.

you should make some more of this story i find very nice and I'd like to see the end of it... well i mean there was an end but I want to see inu's reaction and what happens with naraku

are you gonna update because i think you do!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it usually I don't care for crossovers but I really liked this one maybe I'll read somemore

Such a well written one shot. LOL, I wish you had decided to make it a full story, but this is fine too. I don't think I can add any more praise then what's already been said, so I will just say great job. :)