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this was good but i would have liked it better if you had said what type of youkai kagome turns into and inuyasha's reaction to her mating hiei

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This was really good. I don't think that you need to worry about staying away from one-shots. This has the potential to turn into a full story.

you should try writing more one-shots this was great I don't if my opinion matters that much but i think this is one of the best oneshots I've ever read Kagome*Hiei Forever =D

Moooou T^T Just toooo good to be true.... really liked it... normally Hiei/Kag parrings isn't the ones I cherrish the most... but this was really good made... well done ^_____^

Thumbs up for ya! Don't think it can be done better.... please continue with the one-shots... you're pretty good at it... special I loved the ending... it told ya had a red line trough the whole story... and you remembered to add it so it matched the tittle perfectly... I'm looking forward to more from you... specially one-shots... Hiei is a good tema... and If it's you Kagome may be his mate^____~

Love and admiration from Bouken~

...(crys) that was sooo sweet! Inuyasha doesn't have very good likings in ffs...evryone makes him the bad guy...I think its funny! HeHe
Kira

You have to turn this into a fic, it's too good not to! PLEASE do so I love the story and I'ld like to see how the spirit detectives react to Heiei mating with Kagome.

I am enjoying your current story so much, I just had to come back and re-read this. It's one of my favorite one-shots! I'll be re-reading your other great stories, too. They're fantastic and so satisfying. The only other thing I could have wished for in this one would have been Inuyasha's reaction to her re-marking. Heh heh! Maybe someday you can do a one-shot sequel?

This was a good crossover, with a very beliveable sequence of events. The ONLY thing I have to comment on is that you rushed it. The time span in which things were taking place was very blured. However Like I said it was very good. My opinon (if you don't mind) Is that you should've made it into a longer story set in chapters, instead of trying to make it all fit into a very long rushed one-shot; but like I said the sequence of events that took place were VERY likely to have happened if the two worlds ever became aware of each other.

I definitly think that you should continue to write this story, and add a lot more chapters! Hope you update soon!!