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by animechick262003

person Mmoirai
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well! I have to say, I am really enjoying this story. I don't usually read anything but Rin and Sess, but since this was one of yours and you decided to post it again before any of your others, I thought...'what the heck.' Well, I'm glad I did, and now I'm eagerly awaiting your next installment of 'Collide', 'Seducing Sesshoumaru', and 'Ugly Beautiful'. You have a true gift for story telling. I was very happy to see you back in the community. I have a secret crush on Kouga. I love the way you portray him here. *SHHHHHHH* don't tell Sesshoumaru! I don't want him to get jealous.
person delibertlee
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it before, and I love it even more now! Dont ever stop!
person Fallon
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! :)

You know what, if you want to tell the flamers to go to hell, you go right on ahead and do it. of course, you may get about a million messages from other people telling them to go to hell too, but hey, they really don't have any right to flame you. Especially if they don't have anything they've posted up before, and even if they do, anyone could see going through your stories that you were improving as you went along. And actually, it may be a good idea to keep a copy of some of the old stories unedited so you and others can go back and see the improvement, it may even help others trying to learn how to write with their own stories, maybe put notes on them here and there and post it up somewhere as kindof a tutorial! XD Or maybe I'm going a bit too far >.>

Really though, I do wish you the best of luck and an ass-load of fun ;D These are your stories, you go right on ahead and do whatever you wanna do, so long as you have fun with it!

Now then, I'm ganna be bad, skip working on this horrible essay I haven't even started on and is due tomorrow, and go read this story 'cause I don't remember it at all XDD
person Jaxxia7
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You have no clue how happy you've made me by reposting your fictions. The statements you made about MSWord are so true. The programs are only as good as the people who designed them. But that's beside the point. You are an excellent writer and have been a fan of yours since 'Of Sin and Consequence'. Hardly your first fiction but it was the first time I'd ever read anything by you. That particular story has moved my heart in more ways than one. Actually, all of your fictions I've read have. I have to say that 'Seducing Sesshoumaru' and 'Ugly Beautiful' are two of my current favorites. I even had most of your stories saved on my favorites list on my AOL. I nearly cried when I saw your posting about quitting. I've been around the fanfiction community for only a few years...I've been told many times that my grammar sucks and I have no talent. I just bend over and tell them to kiss it! You should never second guess yourself on any accomplishment. The reviews, in my opinion, speak for themselves and personally, forgive my language, I don't give a rat's ass what the select few think of my work. I write, I love it, end of story! If you take flames personally then there's really no sense in writing. Trust me, I've been tempted more than once to throw in the towel but finally decided it wasn't worth my time to let them see that they got to me. You're a very strong writer and your stories weave a picture that only a select few published authors have been able to capture. Your stories make me laugh, cry, sympathize, get angry, etc. Never, never, never give that up to someone who flames for the sake of flaming. Life is too short for it! Now that I've ranted...hope to see those reposts from you very soon.

Ja ne!

Fellow fanfiction Authoress, Nefra
person Maggz
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I did? Well, I did what I thought it was right at the moment, I was just being honest- get used to it! *lol* And I'm proud of it *grin* but I feel proudder of you, hun. I must admit I was a bit harsh but I'm glad you took it well and made the right decision... for all of us =P (I know, I'm being selfish here but it can't be helped *rolls eyes*) I'm glad to see you have grown up as a writer, as an artist and you're willing to improve. Keep up the awesome work and never stop to amaze us, cause you know your fans will always be there for you. Welcome back to the fanfiction world!
Maggz

P.S.: Oh, gosh, I'm so happy!

person Laurell-chan
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for deciding to continue your stories, it makes me really happy that I'm going to be able to finish and reread your fics that I've loved. And that you respect your fans opinions and they mean so much to you. I've always loved your stories and its authors like you that inspire others to start writing, so knowing you didn't give up so easy means a lot to all of us. Welcome back
person RONA
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness. I was really worried that you were gone for good. By the way, just to let you know. Even the most sucessful, famous, writers(authors) of any book, must go though a proof reader and editor. And believe me they probably have more grammer errors than anyone else. As for myself. I have alot of ideas in my head, but when I want to write a story or anything of that matter, I can't really structure it properly. It seems that my mind goes faster than my hand, and I am afraid I will forget what I am thinking of that moment to write down, then I seems that what I wrote down doesn't make any sense when you read it. Anyway, what I am trying to say is that, your writing skills are great, I obivosly love your stories and they make sense to me. I am 31 years old and I still have trouble constucting a proper paragraph, so don't worry about what others say. Also English is the only language that I know, so go figure. So I am looking forward for more stories from you so keep writing. Thanks
person Laini
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good to see that you've decided to come back.Who cares if other ppl dont like your work,all that matters is the ppl who DO like your work.and i for one LOVE ur work.and i know other ppl who have reviewed do too.i mean ive read fanfics that are just TERRIBLE but your work?..bad?..horrible?! NO FREAKING WAY.you've got such a creative mind and you are good at writing.Dont quit something you love to do just b/c a few baka ppl say that its crap,they just dont know a great story when they read it.Im looking forward to more of ur stories in the future and u can bet that i will review b/c all great authors deserve it.

P.S. Good Luck with your postings ^_^
person KogasAngel
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to see that you came back. I was totally missing this fic and now I will be able to read it. You have done such a wonderful job on it and I am thrilled to see that it will be continued. Ok, now I am waiting for the next chapter and I know that it will be just as good as the others.

KogasAngel
person Catt
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!! Welcome back!!! I am so thrilled to see your here again! It's wonderful and amazing to see you giving it another try. To be honest I was praying you'd change your mind and I got my wish! Yay! I love your stories, and I can't see a wonderful writer like you just quit man! I never found any of your stories terrible, not once. I'm not the best writer in the world, heh you can see that man! But I still come back and yes you have no idea how many times I wanted to quit writing just like you but we all feel that way sometimes so no worries about it. ^_^ Welcome back girly, can't wait to read your next chapter!!! Awesome fic!