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for The Power of Seven

by kimisan

person Anon
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i want to see some genkai yusuke action
person Ryukotsusei
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, here is but the first of the repeat reviews. Hopefully they won't disappear again. I love the interaction that you have between Yusuke and Genkai. The tension that you have between them and the baiting that they are doing with each other is a very nice touch. Yomi and Rin's predicament is nice as well. *Hands you Hiei cookies* I'm off to the next chapter.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I said it before, I'll say it again. What the hell was Hiei thinking kissing Mukuro?? *Chases him around the room* damn baka male, I never told him he could do that *Grumbles and wacks Hiei again* That'll teach him, if he does it again I'm going to kick his ass..

Nice lemon between Sango and Shura, I'm convinced that Yomi is going to have his head on a plate. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.
person kougalover123
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapters please update again soon.
person Trista
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far keep up the good work. I'm more for the Sano/Kagome pairing, never seen one of those before. Update soon
person Chell
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD, you had her fuck Shura! I wasn't expecting that, please tell me he will straighten his ass up. I want to see some Hiei/Kagome action. Please please, oh when is Sano going to get lucky?
person Ryukotsusei
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since you liked it so much the first time, I'll say it again. Oh My They Fucked!! Seriously, I love the Yusuke/Genkai lemon. Very well done considering the amount of tension between the two. And a nice job on the lime between Shiz and Kurama. I don't know that I would have been able to keep quiet. I love Hiei's little show of jealousy at Kougas appearance. *Hands you Hiei cookies* Update soon please
person .......
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sucks you lost your reviews, I'm up to date on the chapters and can't wait for the next one. please update soon.
person kougalover123
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love lemons, that was great, i want more please update again soon.
person SilverPhoenix21
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Can't wait for the next work.
**Ash**