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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh so cute! love it! you should definatly do a chapter story, i bet you'd be great at it!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, again good writing, and funny! I love how you put the little thoughts in between the writing to further the title of the story. LOL, that is a good reason for her to be late
side note, in reading a couple of your fics you spell "disgusted" "discusted"
You have "minor" difficulty with some english verb use and spelling but nothing that I can't understand. LOL I shouldn't even point it out since I have tons of typo's in my own stuff and know it and still don't fix it LOL
side note, in reading a couple of your fics you spell "disgusted" "discusted"
You have "minor" difficulty with some english verb use and spelling but nothing that I can't understand. LOL I shouldn't even point it out since I have tons of typo's in my own stuff and know it and still don't fix it LOL
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Nice piece of fluffyness ... and since this piece is so obviously far into the future as compared to the present state of their relationship in the Manga, it can't be tagged as OOC either. Write more ;)
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice tease, thought for a min. she was stepping out on the old dog LOL Nicely done, Inpatiently waiting to read your next one.