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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you could add a lil more details
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey yall that was some lemon i loved it add in some more chapters okee dokee
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't have imagined a more suitable first time for those two LOL. You really stayed true to the characters. Awesome!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My computer screen is steamy!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful, love it. I wish there was more but we can't always have our way! Good job staying true to the characters, it is just how I would imagine their first time.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really great! u should really keep writing!! i can't wait till u make your next story. u can bet your life that i'll read it ^__^ hehe keep up the G-R-E-E-E-A-T work!!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story and so sweet, I can't wait to read your next story!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty cool nice one shot
cool lemon
cool lemon