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for Fire of Lust Forever in my Heart

by ForGetMeNot

person earthseas-Tehanu
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story, you kept the characters true to their nature. I would advise a spell checker though next tme.. well done
person jamie
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue this... it was pretty good... email me if u decide to write more
person anna yasha
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was kick asssssssssss please keep
going your good
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was a great sex scene....KInda made me horny.lol. Well i hop eu make this into a story. Update soon please

*Kin Kin Yuma

person Lill
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!
Keep up the good work!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Paradiseboy
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic.Could use a grammar cure though.Write more please
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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U R A Genious

It's so good write more
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I LLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IIIITTTT

U R A Genious

It's so good write more
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I LLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IIIITTTT

U R A Genious

It's so good write more
person Lifes little mystery
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not as wild as i hoped for ,but it was sweet.but it was also verey short...................try doing a scean in the forest!..*giggles*...that would soooo rock