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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was smokin'!!! it all i got to say...
Chidori-dragon
Chidori-dragon
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*crys* that was so awesome! i agree with you, sex sceans are fun to write. cant wait to read more of your stuff! Ja-Ne
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um... You Need To Find A Beta Fast... Or Get Some Major Editing Skills... It's Not Horrible... But The Lemon Tends To Be Weak And There Should Definitly Be More Imagery. Your Metaphores Should Probably Be Stronger Too... They Just Sound Genaric.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great.=)
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome flick. lots of description is always good.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome flick. lots of description is always good.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW how sweet they make a good cupple
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang.... this Lemon turned me on.... LOL anyway, very good detail. I love the way you used similies and metaphors for Kagome's "flower".
-Antari
-Antari
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! Keep up the good work. I don't usually read Kag/Inu, but I'm glad I did today.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo i loved this!! i wish i was kagome....