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Nice

it's been a long time... it was a good start. i have so many questions... were they attacking just because she's miko or for the jewel? she's hurt and apparently someone came to her rescue so who, what will they do with her, she can't go to a regular hospital because there would be too many questions... will they figure she's the jewel's gardian and need to keep her safe? why can't she access her power? what happens next? what/who is her next enemy and what is thier modus operandi? are the SD involved now or will they be later?

you can finish this... you have written the beginnning eloquently, i know you can do it... even if you don't finish this, don't quit writing, you are good at it!

thank you,
ginny

Not fair to have such a cliffhanger. Update soon. Can't wait to read what happens with Kagome. Hiei/Kagome or Kurama/Kagome or even Hiei/Kagome/Kurama.

Update soon!

i like it. i wonder who it is.hehehe. please continue.

Awesome first chapter--and new! Fresh ideas make me happy! It's coming along awesome so far. Keep up the terrific work! Update when you can!
Sayuri-chan~

I like it, it looks like a very good start. I have to wonder which one of the guys it was that found her. I'm guessing either Yusuke or Kurama. I look forward to reading the next chapter, update soon please.

interesting

Chapter 1: I love this so far! I have a good guess as to who it was that saved her, so to speak. Keep up the godo work and update again soon, this is very good for your first time writing.