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for Lost Time and Bloody Betrayals

by kimisan

person Lady Banshee 999
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! This story so rocks. I love Kagome with a backbone driving the men nuts! Your other stories have her wallowing in suffering while the guys take on the, I'm above you, you suffer, attitude. LOL, I hope it's the other way round with this story. Don't get me wrong. I LOVE your stories, but I am hoping that the attitude is on the other foot this time. Can't wait to read more. LOL, I got a hoot out of her reaction to seeing them again. TTFN!
person MidnightTimberWolf
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just couldn't stop reading.... I loved it... its action packed gorific and wonderful lemons.... I can't wait to read more... Oh and please try to make the chapters longer if you are able. Until next time....
person Kage Otome
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read the next chapter, when will they meet again? What will there reactions be? Oh please update asap!
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch.. damn I guess she told them didn't she? lol Serves him right, perhaps he can come up with one hell of an apology. Assuming they get rid of Sess first. Good chapter!
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter, good detail on the fights. I think Kurama is shocked silly lol I'm off to read the next chapter, good work!
person Ralina
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome rocks!! Kicking Yomi's butt, and yelling at Kurama... it's time for the males to sweat and feel the angst! I absolutely love how you characterized her, she feels so alive in this story. Wonderful job as always, waiting to read more.

Ralina
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This should be very interesting. I wonder how Kurama's going to react to Yomi's decision to get closer to her. Assuming Sesshoumaru doesn't issue a touch her and die statement first lol Good chapter!
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks Like Kags might be in for the ride of a lifetime. And she has no idea whose coming for her lol Good chapter!
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yomi's a pervert lol Listening in like that, makes me wonder what he was doing on the other side of the door. Good chapter!
person tami
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ur one of my fav authors and this story is great atho i was curious where kuroune is i pretty sure kuroune was there when yomi was apart of youko group or have u rearanged the timeline to fit ur story either way it rocks update asap ja ne x