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for Lost Time and Bloody Betrayals

by kimisan

person me
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
in the 1st chapter kagome was verry well in character except for the cussing we all know sweet lil kagome doesnt cuss
person Kage Otome
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Grins* i love it, Naraku is positively evil and the two are both wanting her and Kagome thinks none of them care/love her, I love this!
person Lady Banshee 999
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Well, you could have atleast left some money." ~ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! OMGS! Love it. Really great chapter. Can't wait to read more. *walks off laughing muttering* "Flip a god damn coin" HAHAHAHA!!!
person Ralina
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where do you come up with these ideas? That is pure genius! The only solutions I could think of are the obvious kill Naraku, have someone else mark her, or *My personal favorite* kill her off and have Sesshoumaru bring her back to life with the Tensaiga (I wonder why no one else thinks that - boom she'd be alive again good as new - no marks or anything). Then again with her bonded with the jewel that might be risky. Can she tell where Naraku is at all times now? One has to wonder how far Naraku thought ahead on this, maybe there are some dare I suggest it 'good' side effects? **Shudder** Being mated to that creep would give me the willies. (<- Understatement of the year) It's a pleasure to read your stories. Keep up the fabulous job!

Ralina
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo she got marked!!! that really suks poor kags now naraku is her mate... plz update soon
person Ralina
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah I try and draw an arrow and the computer reads it as html! Anyway in parentheses was (Understatement of the year) with an arrow pointing to the previous sentence. As always it's a pleasure to read your stories, and I also wrote that I'm looking forward to the next installment. Fabulous job!

Ralina
person Kage Otome
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...And the plot thickens.
person Kage Otome
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapters, tis a pity Shura had to die...But...Oh well. I wonder what Kurama's and Yomi's reaction is...
person Kage Otome
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, now we see their reactions...I wonder what Yomi is going to try to do... *wiggles eyebrows suggestively* It doesn't take a genius to figure it out...*grins* I can't wait!
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naive Kagome, she really has no idea does she? She's going to be pissed when someone explains it to her lol Good chapter