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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooouch. The bastards! lol. There better be some lemony goodness with fluff in some soon to be chapter! grrrrr. Stupid males.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OMG
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @ Kagome peeing on his bed. LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OMG
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @ Kagome peeing on his bed. LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't tell me that it is finished. I want to know what will happen with them now that they're mated. Please update soon!!!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jeese i cant believe they left its the least they could do for their new mate boy for kagomes sake i sure hope their is eventualy some love \w one of tem involved later on i couldnt take being bound to two guys and not having either love me and leave me right after sex i sure hope they feel guilty as hell for it
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I don't know how she does it. I think I would have slit my throat or something lol Well, it should be interesting to see how this plays out and if jealousy will be a fact on anyones part other than Narakus. Good chapter!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Men Hmmphh... Figures they'd both leave her there like that. Good lemon, she's lucky in one way but damn.. Her mates could use a bit of work in the compassion dept. *Thwaps both of them* Update soon please.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah they both just left her alone in the room after fucking her.... wow i feel bad for kags she thinks that they are just using her again and that they dont care bout her
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oaky, I've waited until ch.10 to review for a good reason.
I wanted to see how you portrayed Yomi's personality 1000 years ago. At first I feared that it would follow other fics that have him act as he does in the current era.
But By ch.10 I see you have him act as the show said he acted back then, He's head strong and brash. Those other fics also have Yomi blind and have three ears back tehn, he didn't.
I'm glad to see that you have Yomi in character as he was 1000 yrs ago.
I wanted to see how you portrayed Yomi's personality 1000 years ago. At first I feared that it would follow other fics that have him act as he does in the current era.
But By ch.10 I see you have him act as the show said he acted back then, He's head strong and brash. Those other fics also have Yomi blind and have three ears back tehn, he didn't.
I'm glad to see that you have Yomi in character as he was 1000 yrs ago.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grr...What kind of jackass leaves a girl alone after sex?! Well, with the exception of Prostitutes and stuff...Err...Yes, well, I hope she gives them a lashing of some type...Keep up the good work!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue its wonder but sad those pricks just walked away