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for I'll be there for you

by Torne

person InuSango
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first several chapters. But this story becomes boring. Too many non-anime characters, Inuyasha - complaining, sulking , but doing nothing, Kagome - ignoring Inu, flirting with other guys, Well, hey, Kagome, Inu is not just your rescuer. He's there because of you. He's really lonely now. Don't flirt with others anymore!!!
Please focus on Inu-Kags. They're wasting too many times already.
person lanier
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG how could this happen to kagome! Inuyasha better save her... and stop sulking.
person lanier
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whew I knew inuyasha would save her. cant wait for more.
person pat
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally the kiss pretty good and man u gotta no i like it by now because iv reaviewed it aver wat 6 times ya i like it so bring in more please
person InuyashaBaka
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the great story.
Could you update more? Please....
person You don\'t need to know
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmpf
This fic had a lot of potencial... but you have seriously fucked it up...
person pat
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no fair a cliffy aaaaaaggggghhhhhh! o well like it ,loved it the usual
update please
person kogas_angel
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story keep writing....or die!!!!!
person chanda
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, you are so welcome, it was a very good story so far, knowing you. You will probably have me hanging on the edge of my seat. I checked out your website and you are a fantastic artist. Ok back to the story, I wonder what pulled kags under.. guess I will have just wait for your update.

Chanda
person chanda
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, not nice...pouting... oh please update soon.... OH and if it will make you update faster...He, he, he, I will read your other story and review...LOL.... ( jk) I would have read it anyway....

Thanks,
Chanda