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it's good

This is intersting. I wonder will come of this type of relationship tragedy or joy. It is difficult to decide, I enjoyed it though.

Oh wow, this story is fantastic! I'm not a fan of Sesshomaru and Rin as a pairing, but this is so well done, I can imagine this happening. Excellently written, Sesshomaru's dilemma was clearly conveyed. I loved the part when he was thinking that Rin had not lost her respect for him even though he had lost all respect for himself; a perfect analogy! Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter.

If that was your first lemon....you did a great job....it was way better than my first lemon.......I just wish Sesshomaru would see Rin for what she is .....she is no kin to him.....true he watch over her when she was younger, but that doesn't mean that a fatherly image was formed..... I just want Rin and Sesshomaru together....in love with each other....

At first I wasn't going to read your story since you had minor and ped in the summary. I love rin/sess stories but I don't like it when she is super young. But I started to read the first chapter and I have no regrets. This has to be one of the most original story lines I've read in a long time. Usually its Sess who is fighting his feelings toward the girl and in this case he is fighting his feelings mainly because rin has made him her whore. A very good lemon. I think after a few more sessions sess will be begging for more and won't feel to disgusted from their sessions. Its funny how rin has no problem with sess having no lustful feelings for her. There are so many posibilities with this story. Like what if that herbal mixture didn't work on demon spawn. : D. I look forward to your next chapter. PS How many chapter do you think your story is going to be?

Wow, I like this story, it was recommended to me and I am glad I read it. I found no mistakes of any kind and I am looking foreward to reading future chapters. You are truly a wonderful writer. Please don't leave us in suspence long.

was interesting, sightful, and well written. The author should write more stories and given a an award.

I don't know how you going to pull this off....but, I can't wait to find out.......keep it coming.....

OMG this fanfiction is soo good! and very well written, please update soon! keep up the awesome work!

AH! OMG THIS IS SOOO GOOD!! :D i lurve it soo much oh wont you please please finish??usually when i read sesshomaru romance fics, hes really out of character but this fic captures sesshy PERFECTLY!!! PLEASE FINISH!! i know youre working as fast as u can but i'll die if i dont read it!! arigato!! ^_^ ja ne!