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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not quite sure how to take this fiction. I'm so used to all the lovey dovey fluffy WAFF fics that this one took me completely by surprise. While I don't believe that Sesshoumaru is completely in character, and neither is Rin, it brings to light a disturbing situation that I've been in before.
Sesshoumaru is not the kind of demon that ruts solely for pleasure, and neither is Rin the kind of girl that would take pleasure from him willingly without knowing that he loves her.
Sex...unwanted sex...regardless of whether is is consensual or not...always makes me sick to my stomach. I remember being with my ex boyfriend and scrubbing my skin until I was raw because the aftermath of sex with him disgusted me. The smell of him on my skin made me nauseous, and there was nothing he could do to make me love him, no matter how gentle and kind he was to me.
So it begs the question...why did I put myself through it? Because I felt obligated to. And Sesshoumaru is a creature of obligation.
Great fiction in the long run. You have a knack for disturbing the reader beyond words.
I look forward to further work.
BG
Sesshoumaru is not the kind of demon that ruts solely for pleasure, and neither is Rin the kind of girl that would take pleasure from him willingly without knowing that he loves her.
Sex...unwanted sex...regardless of whether is is consensual or not...always makes me sick to my stomach. I remember being with my ex boyfriend and scrubbing my skin until I was raw because the aftermath of sex with him disgusted me. The smell of him on my skin made me nauseous, and there was nothing he could do to make me love him, no matter how gentle and kind he was to me.
So it begs the question...why did I put myself through it? Because I felt obligated to. And Sesshoumaru is a creature of obligation.
Great fiction in the long run. You have a knack for disturbing the reader beyond words.
I look forward to further work.
BG
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating this story, I have been waiting a really long time.
please update soon!
please update soon!
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes Jaken....sometime it is better to think it than to say it.....keep it coming....I'm glad Sesshomaru is getting over that silly father/daughter thing......Hell...they are not blood!!!!!!
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May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated! I swear, I know i'll be embarassed later, I look everytime I come on this site to see if you updated. It is so undeniably cute, the way Sesshoumaru is treating Rin. And he wants to make her happy. But I do feel real bad for him that for what he had to go through; the fact that he didn't want to touch Rin. Well please update soon or when you have time because I know that life is definitely time consuming.
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May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, that was short. OK, beggers can't complain. What ever crumbs you toss out I'll scoop up gleefully.
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I've checked to see if you updated your story and you haven't. I am dreadfully sad! I absolutely love your story! Please update as soon as you have time. Thanks!
Your most loyal fan:
amhor56
Your most loyal fan:
amhor56
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
New chapter please. Please!
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May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heee~ Sesshomaru as a man whore. I love you. Please finish this, this is so original. And your lemon was quite nummy! More pwease?
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March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was HAWT and a original twist on the typical Sess/Rin. Nice Work!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was deep. I really enjoyed reading this one. I don't read dark fics, but this one was veeeery good. Please do Continue...