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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow....for a first time you are really, really good. Way better than what I was when I started. I would absolutly love it if you added more chapters! If possible of corse....please?
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am interesred to see what happens next plz update soon
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was good continue it i wanna see where it goes :-D
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO KIKYO BASHING ALL THE WAY!!!! lol good start it would help if ya spaced out the paragraphs though and it's a bit short but still it's great! plz update soon?
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a bit short...needs to be spaced between paragraphs..the start is used alot but i think you could do some pretty good things with this im interested to see where this goes good job update soon.
btw nice with the kikyou bashing and all
btw nice with the kikyou bashing and all
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, you have a wonderful start here. If you could make the chapters longer and down-play the Kikyou bashing, it would be a pleasure to read. :) Please continue, i'd love to read more.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although the 'Kagome sees Inuyasha with Kikyo' start is used a lot, I liked the way you made Inuyasha willing to kill Kagome. Love the writing style, very unique. Tad short for my liking, but it's a good start. Abrupt ending, makes me curious to what will happen next. Hope you update soon :)
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice first chapter. Just a suggestion--space your paragraphs out for easier reading. Other than that, it's a great start! Update soon!
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