rate_review Reviews

Great story, and very well written. I also liked your other story "Hate". A lot of people said it made no sense, and that it was very fucked up. They forget that the decent into madness very rarely is logical. It almost seemed like a horrible dream that Inuyasha would have where every dark and twisted desire he had ever felt deep down had manfested itself in the most evil and overwhelming of ways. It was kinda surreal in a way. My props to you for sticking it out and finishing what you started despite the negative comments. ja ne

I certainly enjoyed that! Nice work. Keep it going! What story are you doing next?

yes. Shippou should know that Inuyasha only did it to let Shippou that he care for him like a son.

I wouldn't care what people say. It's your story and you should stick to it

This is just another your sick story....I guess....!

hmm I don't think you should continue this fic... It isn't bad or anything it's actually really good but it will do more harm than good if you continue this...

just let it stand as a 'two-shot' on it's own....

I think you should continue. I rarely read yaoi, because personally I'm not a big fan - but when it comes to this fiction, I feel I'd enjoy it.

Sure! I love any of your stories. Keep it up. (Insert joke)
How about Inuyasha spanking Sango or Kikyo or maybe Kagura. But then again, you never know. But I want this story to continue. E-mail me. I would like to know if you need a beta reader.

this is a funny story. and yes i was spanked when i was bad it never killed me.

If you wish to continue, then continue. It's as is easy as that. If someone has a problem with your fanfiction then they just shouldn't read it. It's very simple. If they are not giving you constructive criticism or praise then they should simply stop reading and go to another story. Why they find it necessary to tell you to stop writing altogether, I will never know. I will think you an idiot if you stop writing just because some do not agree with the nature of your story. I, personally, love where the story is going. I hope you update soon.