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for Torn - Never lose your smile

by JunaBlossom

schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue
even with the rough translation i can really picture whats going on
if you finish the story i'll give you a lollipop
^_^
haha! please keep going.
person a lost soul
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I can't wait until your next chapter. Please let it be soon though. Oh and keep up the good work ^_^
person putrikagome
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey....that's so sad. Don't let Inuyasha....go! Kagome. ....Now I got the chance to say....UPDATE! FAST!!.... Hurray!!
Thanks for your sweet words about my stories *blushing*. Wow....I m not sure whether I m really that good though...girl :). So many talented Writers in here including you. Anyway, I said again I love you girl everything about you^_^
person CarrieFay
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I think its really good even if it is translated and little hard to understnd sometimes. Im sure everyone else will, or should like it to! If anyone bitches to much about it you could always try to get someone to help with the grammer. Unless of course you dont want to which is fine! :) If there is another chapter i hope to see it soon!