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by kimisan

schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This is great! I've NEVER seen this pairing before, and it's totally awesome that you're doing something original. And you're doing an EXCELLENT job with it. Suggestion for Rin pairing? Definately Hiei. Cause he's so much like Sesshoumaru...well...somewhat. If there's anyone who can open him up, it would be our sweet lil' Rin. That, and she's got spunk, and not afraid to inflict pain...hehe (points to Yusuke) Well, it's a totally schway story so far! Update as soon as you can!! =)
Sayuri-chan~
person Kazuma\'s FanGirl
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let this teen Rin ge together with a teen Shippo
please no Kurama or Hiei they're so full of themselves. They need to be taken down a size

OHHHHHH I got an idea! Let it be a f/f pairing!
Let Yukina like Rin, that would YUkina out of the equation for Kagome and Kazuma to get together. After all, Yukina comes from an all female society, that needs no males for procreation. So being with another female for company is natural for her.

person Anon
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rin/kurama
person tomy
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well i've talked to my friends about this story and where its going and we agree that we would like to see a rin/kurama pairing

the story's great so far and thats just are input

p.s maybe sesshiles could be alive in makai and find out about rin so there could be some rivalry between kurama for rins affection

love your story

tomy
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yuske/rin please
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm that isa good question as to how he knew she was nude unless he saw the close dropped to the floor or something. Either way, I hope he enjoyed however much of a show he got lol So Rin might be coming back, I wonder how she will fit into everything. Good chapter, update soon please
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kuwabara, guess that just told him where his relationship was going with her. Maybe Kagome can make him happier. Good chapter, please update soon.
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great
person j
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rin/kurama

rin/sesshoumaru
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If it's not going to be a Rin/Sesshoumaru, then how about Rin/Kurama. Being human she can relate to his human side, and having spent so much time with Sesshoumaru, she could probably wrap Youko around her little finger. Also, it would be the perfect opportunity to get rid of Eri.

Really like how you are portraying Kuwabara. He is much more mature in your story just like he was at the end of the series. Look forward to your next update.