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well thats a good way to get the ball rolling with the two of them lol Youko needs to be slapped. Whatever happened to him being good with words? lol Seems to me its a case of open mouth insert foot. Good chapter, update soon please.

I like the way you're portraying Kuwabara. Most authors tend to make him overly oafish, but I think you've got a much more accurate depiction here--lovably goofy without being too stupid, and of course very honorable. Nice job! Keep it up, I'm anxious to see more.

Finally they are starting to see the problem of the retionship between Kazuma and Yukina.... It's more like best freinds thatn a boyfriend and girlfriend.

Well, suddenly throwing yourself in a guys arms and kissing him is one to show himhe's not unwanted ;)

Poor Kagome and Rin, they can't help who they've fallen for. Now if only both boys would notice that the girls did indeed like them. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.

ooohh... that makes sense :) Thanks for answering my question...
Keep up the great writing! ;)

RinxHiei, of course. Yuusuke's taken and Kurama always gets the girl or the guy or the whatever. I guess Koenma is another option but who wants a father-in-law like Enma?

Oh man that's got to burn Kurama's ass that she willingly kissed Kuwabara lol *snickers* That'll put a kink in his tail. Good chapter, please update soon.

Kurama's lucky she didn't continue through with her attacks on him. I'd say she difinately picked up some of Sesshoumaru's mannerisms lol Good chapter, update soon please.

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GAH, After Yusuke destrying the well, I wouldn't count him as a freind so quickly but add hit to teh sme shit list as Krauma and Hiei .. at least for a few days.
Well, Rin told us what happened to Sango and Miroku, but what about Shippo and Kirara? Are they still alive in the Makai??

I would love to see a grown Shippo take interest with this version of Rin,....
Unless you plan on setting her up with someone else. At first I was thinking of Yusuke but it seems he and Keiko get alonf fine in this It is nice to see a x-over that would keep Yusuke and ?Keiko together. Ugh, I don't want to see Rin with Hiei or Kurama either though, but if she has a personality similar to Hher lord's she may hold on to grudges for a long time XD

I do hope that Shippo isn't dead, I would like to see him come back, with the way they make demons grow slowly, he would most likeky be areound '18' in growth. But what I miss is the protectiveness he has for Kagome.