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*applause and shouts of encouragement*

Poor Kagome, her hearts gotta be a bruised bloody mess right now. The only thing left to do is dump it in the blender and hit puree. Good chapter, please update soon.

Glad Hiei took that bitch out. The nerve of her *growls* Hmm not this is becoming interesting.. Rin's interested in Yusuke, Yusuke is in love with Keiko, Youko just marked Rin but wants Kagome, and Kagome wants Kuwabara who is in love with Yukina. I gotta hand you a new crown. You are now the queen on Convoluted Relationships lol Good chapter, update soon please.

This is great, didn't see the Keiko/Yusuke break up (Rin luv interest????). This story just keeps on getting better. I felt pretty sad for Kuwabara when he realized Yukina never thought of him as anything else but a friend. That really hurt him. Kag's will show him differently (snickers...). Again well written and most amusing. I can't wait for the Kurama reaction. Can't wait to read more and keep up the wonderful work (Uuuhhh.. writing.)

I probably should save this for my own fic but at the rate that's coming...

Another issue with Yukina is it is very likely that she was sexually abused by Tarukane's (sp?) thugs. After all, they needed to hurt her to get her to cry. So not only is sexual reproduction a perversion, she may have had a horribly negative introduction to it.

I was outvoted on Hiei/Rin, I take it?

Kuwabara kun! :: huggles :: Crushing blow, but it had to be done. Yukina seems like she would rather not have anyone than someone who wanted more and couldn't have it. She'll let him go...hopefully. But Hiei's reaction might be not be for the better...although, if she let Kuwabara go, then it wouldn't be a problem. But if he ends up breaking things off and it hurts Yukina...then Hiei might just have to go and kill him...and that would be very devistating to all the fun steps him and Kagome have taken so far! Ah, you must write more! I'm addicted to your story!
Sayuri-chan

I was wondering how you were planning on separating Kuwabara and Yukina, and I think you've handled it well. Leave it to Shizuru to put things into perspective (I just love her)! Well, good job--keep it up!

Looks like the girls (and guys) are in a spot of trouble. Figures it was a set up. *shakes head* Maybe next time they won't rush headlong into something like this. Good chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next.

Man I feel for Kuwabara.. Appearently Kagome does as well just in different ways lol I can only imagine how that kiss is going to fuel both of their fantasies now lol Good chapter, please update soon.

Good story, I can't wait to see how it turns out :)
One question, though... Is it strange that Kagome calls him by his last name instead of his 1st if he is going to be her love interest?