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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad bad kitsune, well. At least he made sure that Rin enjoyed it. Good chapter, love the lemon. Update soon please
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just thought of something, if Kagome was fertile and got pregnant, then if Kuwabra got together with her, she may fells he's doing it out of honor and duty, not love....
Time will tell if she's pregnant or not, after all one time is enough for a human female...if it's timed just before the woman ovulates.
Time will tell if she's pregnant or not, after all one time is enough for a human female...if it's timed just before the woman ovulates.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for more. I have noticed 1 thing though, when using out it should usually but not always be followed by of, as in; blood gushed out of her neck & you tend to use out by itself; blood gushed out her neck. Hope this is helpful.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's absolutely wonderful
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me that if Kouga or his wolves approach Rin again they are going to have an extremely pissed off kitsune to deal with. And I'm quite certain that Hiei would be more than happy to help in their destruction. Poor Rin, I think we went past the puree feature on that blender. Perhaps Liquify is a better setting. Good chapter, please update soon.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
glad Hiei was able to keep Rin from falling to her death, I don't blame him for being pissed from looking at her memories. Good chapter, update soon please.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!! Ah! I love this story so much!! :: huggles computer :: So good! And as for Kurama and Rin...wow...Sesshoumaru will promise much death to him if he decides to hurt her. Kagome chan! The lemon was so believable! I can see Kuwabara kun being all shy--hell, he hasn't had a girl that would really want to do those kind of things to him. *grins* That was BEFORE Kagome...^^ Well, it's awesome so far, please write more soon!
Sayuri-chan~
Sayuri-chan~
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.22 was well done. They seemed to be very incharacter, from Rin's fear of wolves to Kouga's obsession with Kagome.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. talk about twisty relationships. That was awesome, didn't see the Suichi/Rin chappie (loved it)... Kouga is going to throw one hell of a fit, i can just see him trying to beat up on Poor Kuwabara... Although, Kagome will put wolf-boy in his place. Wooohooo... again keep it up. Awesome story and awesome plot, it just keeps getting better.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update i stayed up all night waiting for the next chappie at least give us one for today