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for The Better Man

by kimisan

schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stupid kurama, he doesn't deserve her at all. She could have died because of his idiocity. Good chapter, update soon please.
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the kurama/rin pairing as much as i wanted to see a yusuke/rin i think u made a very good choice n i havent read many xover that allow yusuke to be with kaiko so im really happy ur keeping it that way^^ i always love to read ur stories please update soon^^
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh the shit is going to hit the fan when everyone wakes up lol Good chapter *Hands you a Youko cookie* Update soon please.
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh the nerve of that bitch twisting things around like that. Maybe Kagome should have let Rin beat the crap out of her. Kurama better get his priorities straight or he WILL lose her. Good chapter, update soon please
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yayyyyyy seshy n rin together again poor kurama hes gonn n lost his mate lol i soo love this story please update soon
person Belle
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just found this story and I couldn't stop reading it. Please keep it up, I'm completely in love with this story!!!
person Sayuri-chan
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...oh my kami...*cries* Dammit why are men so f*cking stupid!? GAh! I love this story! So many misunderstandings--fights...*shivers from the tension* WOW!! Okay, I gotta calm down...this is going to kill me...*walks away from the computer* ................................
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(ten seconds later runs back)

UPDATE SOON!

Sayuri-chan~
person Vanessa
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i love the story. i've been reading all of your fan fictions you have written and i have to say you have a good nack for story writeing. i hope you update some of your others stories as soon as your done with this one.
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh now thats gotta burn Kurama's ass. Thinking that Rin wants nothing to do with him. Can't imagine how this reunion is going to go. Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dodges bits of heart flying across the room* ACK! It's not safe to stand here unless you want to be pelted lol Hmmm it makes me wonder just how long Kurama is going to stay away from her. I don't think he'd listen to Sesshoumaru's threats. Then again he seems pretty pissed off with her. Good chapter, update soon please.