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Wonderful chapters!
Hehe I loved the scene with Hiei sniffing Rin. One thing, I'm not full youkai soo....what did it mean?

Now on to my favorite pairing = Kazuma and Kagome.
About time Kazuma asked her out for a date. But she got stinking drunk. Well one good thing did come out of it, Kagome did make a comment of seducing Kazuma, tht should tell Kazuma that she does like him.

As much as there been on Rin, I want Kagome to get lucky. I can't wait for more action between Kagome and Kazuma.

Hehe I loved Keiko's retation to when Kurama said that Rin may love Yusuke =
"Good! For a while there we were all starting to worry that she might actually be in love with you."
That line is priceless!

Damn, I have to say, out of all your fics I think that Kurama should definitely get the biggest asshole award for this one. Ouch! I think it's high time he did a little gravelling and explaining himself! And then, Rin should still kick his ass! Nice to see Hiei giving him a run for his money though. Hiei just cracks me up--gotta love him! And it's nice to see Kuwabara finally getting up the courage to face Kagome...even if it is in the form of a group date. Hey, everyone's gotta start somewhere! I'm still curious about Yukina's pregnancy, though. Hopefully we'll see more about this in the coming chapters. Great job! Please update soon!

I'm totally enjoying this so far, awesomely written and done. Just would like to see more K/K interaction though. But love where this is going so far. Just would luv to see Rin have a really happy moment also (you know make the Fox really jealous). Anyways, luv what's written and can't wait to read more...

thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou *squeels with delight*
please update soon waited sooo long for chappy
you are the greatest writer ever

kurama should be nuetered

Wow, you really like to lay it on thick for poor Rin! Might be nice to see Kurama get shaken up with a little competition from Hiei, would certainly serve him right. You really have a knack for making him a total asshole sometimes, but it's nice to see him not proper and polite all the time. I do have to wonder about what's going on with Kuwabara and Kagome, though. It seems as though you've shifted the focus away from them, leaving me with all kinds of questions. Like who is responsible for Yukina's pregnancy for one! Don't leave me hangin' here, I gotta know! Plus, I'm anxious to see some interaction between Kagome and Kuwabara. Anyway, great work so far! Keep it up!

This is such a great story Vivian, I hope you keep up the good work.

this story keeps getting better n better i love it ^^ i would love to see this turned into a hiei/rin/kur fic it would be soo great torture the fox for all the pain hes putting rin through please please update soon

Whoo hoo! Go Kagome!! Kurama deserved it. Damn I think I would have slapped him silly. Poor Kags, I can't imagine how much pain she is in as well. Good chapter, update soon please

You had to mix it up even more, didn't you. When are you going to let everyone in on who is in love with whom? The only one not in this is poor Hiei. No one thinks that anyone is in love with him. Are you going to bring Sess into this story just to confuse everyone even more? Can't wait till the next chapter. You do keep me quessing.